Tuesday, August 25, 2009

Coming Of Age/:by Kelvin Baided=Draft

    Through life we all go older and older learn more and more.I still am young so there are more adventures and knowledge that the world holds and what I don't know about. 


      In my coming of age have went through  experience like graduating from intermediate. Then entering high school with no sense of what is ahead of me. Well went I graduated I felt kind of happy to leave that school but also sad. Cause one most of your friends who new for years are going to leave you to go to another high school. Then there is HIGH SCHOOL!!!


      When I was at my old school I was happy to come to a new school and meet new people. I didn't believe in what they said in the movies about high school. About different group of people. The freshman being treated badly and the upper class man pick on them. When I first stepped foot on the school campus. I felt good and positive but as the weeks went by I learned more and more about how the system work here. The are different groups of people. It is like a jungle or forest. See there are us in coming freshman who are the little cubs while the people who school are either nice people(zebras and giraffes) the simple and lay back(pandas) people who do outrageous things(baboons) and the mean and scary people(lions, tiger, and bears).


      But all and all the High School is good after freshman year. You feel more powered over the freshman. You know more people than those you knew from middle school. You have some popularity statics. Well YA!!!!  Hope you like my Coming Of Age essay draft. 



Tuesday, August 11, 2009

My writing experiences have grow. All of the writing with Mrs.Sueoka has been fun here and there but in the end I thin that the essays and reports really help me to become of a better writer. Making me use more creativity ,more vocab for my essays,more voice,be specific, ideas are more interesting. 

Some of my goals in school is to get higher grades to empress my parents, to keep it up, also to be more of a leader.